V9 — Pamflet

Print 2 — Critic round 1. Verdict: "3rd of ten — the most instantly recognisable thesis in the field, but the execution is a mobile column stretched onto a 1440 canvas, and a pamphlet that leaves a third of the sheet blank is not a pamphlet." Top notes, all actioned: the dead right third is gone — the max-width cage was replaced with an edge-to-edge sheet (64px margins), so the display type and the hard rules now run the full width the way a wheat-paste poster does; the manifesto and the service lists became two-column — number and heading on the left, description on the right, one rule spanning the sheet, and the identical treatment now serves both "The work" and "The fronts" (they had drifted apart); the "Gratis. €0." block was rendering in the body font — a bare .shout--2 with no display family, which read as a failed webfont — now the display face on a full-width black bar with cream type, the second-loudest object after the hero; the cover hero was quieter than the interior recruitment poster — the index shout was scaled up so the cover out-shouts everything; the €0 fact was orphaning to its own row — the facts are now a fixed four-up grid with €0 set larger and green, since €0 is the whole organisation's thesis; the mobile manifesto orphaned single words — the four belief headings are hand-broken and balanced; the intake form read as an unstyled default — rebuilt as stamped fields (a single 4px baseline rule, input text in the display face) with a full-width black submit bar; and the eyebrows, nav and placeholder type were raised off their too-small settings. Kept, deliberately: the NOG NIET dashed placeholders, the 4px black section rules, the green-on-last-word device, and the Signed executive-board block — the report named all four as the best things on the site.